I was quite relieved as I did not stumble or forget my contents during the presentation. However, based on the feedback by Brad and my peers, I do feel there is a very serious problem in my contents and I will try to change in my essay draft#4.
Thank you.
Hi Elaine!
ReplyDeleteThanks for you effort you've put into your presentation!
I thought it was interested how you brought up "GST in Malaysia" as the introduction of your presentation. It actually caught my attention and stir great curiosity on how it links to the issue of social media. However, the lack of link made the your presentation/argument a little weak. Given the feedback from both the class and Brad, I believe you should have a clearer idea on how to organise your essay and flow of ideas.
Apart from that, I do enjoy the way you delivered your presentation. You conveyed great enthusiasm and interest in this topic, and I could feel your sincerity when your presented. Thumbs up for that!!
I have no issues with your posture, gestures and other non-verbal cues. Your vocals were also loud and clear and I could understand what you said.
As for you slides, I do feel that you improve on it by using less words and diagrams to illustrate your points.
Here are some links that i used when i first started out using PowerPoint:
http://noteandpoint.com/
http://blog.hubspot.com/marketing/inspiring-slideshare-presentations-for-marketers-list
From there, get a rough idea on how to design your slides.
Just bear in mind that your slides should flow like a story! So the diagrams you used should all be linked and illustrate what you want to present.
All the best for the rest your academic years!
Cheers,
Jovyn