What happened?
English
language journey>(first peer review)>summary>reader
response>influential event>essay
-tutor gave
feedback (formal)
-friends
gave feedback (informal) *we ourselves gave feedback to others too
·
Pointed
out mistakes that I did not know. Ex:run-on sentences
·
Initially
I thought I did a fairly good job at writing, but after reading others’ writing
and others’ comments for me, then I realized I still need a huge improvement
·
But
there are some thesis problems that have never been pointed out
(I did know there were problems, but I could not really identify well so
I posted and hoped others could help me to point them out clearly)
·
Now
I know my disadvantages and I accepted peers’ and tutor’s comments, they are
helpful to me
·
I
have learnt some common mistakes from other comments on my peers’ blogs too
(even though I did not make such mistakes, but it helps to remind me)
·
Try
to improve on my vocabulary>the Sarus
·
Try
to write a more organized essay>repeatedly reading and editing
·
Try
not to make those mistakes even in other classes or even when I am having a
conversation with other people
·
Try
not to make any mistakes at the very first place rather than correcting them
What will
we do with this result? How will you use it to inform your future?
-better
essay writing
-can
deliver my ideas better
-can make
my thesis statements sound more convincing (if there are lesser errors)
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